last rites. . . rain fading into bird song
(Received 1st Place in the 2015 Betty Drevniok Award)
—Carl Seguiban
Issue 15.2 | 23 September 2015
Perfect!
It looks just as perfect to me today, Carl. Wonderful haiku. I hope you enjoyed my comments on it.
Beautiful, memorable haiku. Well done.
Most poignant, Carl.
Ah – lovely! :)
marion
Beautiful piece!
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September 23rd, 2015 at 9:58 am
Perfect!
September 23rd, 2015 at 10:05 am
It looks just as perfect to me today, Carl. Wonderful haiku. I hope you enjoyed my comments on it.
September 23rd, 2015 at 12:10 pm
Beautiful, memorable haiku. Well done.
September 24th, 2015 at 1:25 am
Most poignant, Carl.
September 24th, 2015 at 12:18 pm
Ah – lovely! :)
marion
September 25th, 2015 at 7:06 am
Beautiful piece!