autumn stars
she hopes to go
in her sleep

6 Responses

  1. Paul Ingrassia Says:

    Very powerful, the season and night references accent the impending human end and her wishes perfectly, well done!

  2. janewilliams Says:

    Exquisite.

  3. Sylvia Forges-Ryan Says:

    Beautiful!

  4. Magyar Says:

    A new star joins the night; forever sleep.
    __Heartful, Roland. _m

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    How beautiful and no doubt something most of us would like to achieve

    marion.

  6. hammerandtongs Says:

    Perfect, perfect. In the autumn of her life, hoping for the end we all desire–to misquote DylanThomas "go gently into that good night."

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