after 15 years
i find his address
in his own writing…
stargazing again
on a moonless night

10 Responses

  1. Shrikaanth Krishnamurthy Says:

    A fine one Sreelatha- congrats.

  2. Magyar Says:

    __Grand Sreelatha, and while reading your fine verse, this humble haiku was generated; the stars, the snow flakes.

    of the years
    this fir tree reached the stars
    snow flakes

    I thank you. _m

  3. Garry Says:

    after fifteen years
    his old address
    on the IOU

  4. Hazel Hall Says:

    An elegant tanka full of wistfulness.

  5. Marie Shimane Says:

    Ah, the emotions this generates!

  6. Madhuri Pillai Says:

    Nostalgic. Lovely tanka.

  7. Lamart Cooper Says:

    I like the emotional pull of this tanka. As the reader, I can place myself gazing at the stars…

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Beautifully touching.


  9. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:

    Wonderful composition. Many Congratulations!

  10. hammerandtongs Says:

    Quite wonderful.

    "stargazing again
    on a moonless night"

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