after 15 years i find his address in his own writing… stargazing again on a moonless night
—Sreelatha Nair
Issue 15.2 | 12 October 2015
A fine one Sreelatha- congrats.
__Grand Sreelatha, and while reading your fine verse, this humble haiku was generated; the stars, the snow flakes.
of the years this fir tree reached the stars snow flakes
I thank you. _m
after fifteen years his old address on the IOU
An elegant tanka full of wistfulness.
Ah, the emotions this generates!
Nostalgic. Lovely tanka.
I like the emotional pull of this tanka. As the reader, I can place myself gazing at the stars…
Beautifully touching.
marion
Wonderful composition. Many Congratulations!
Quite wonderful.
"stargazing again on a moonless night"
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October 12th, 2015 at 8:30 am
A fine one Sreelatha- congrats.
October 12th, 2015 at 10:47 am
__Grand Sreelatha, and while reading your fine verse, this humble haiku was generated; the stars, the snow flakes.
of the years
this fir tree reached the stars
snow flakes
I thank you. _m
October 12th, 2015 at 12:32 pm
after fifteen years
his old address
on the IOU
October 12th, 2015 at 1:00 pm
An elegant tanka full of wistfulness.
October 12th, 2015 at 1:16 pm
Ah, the emotions this generates!
October 12th, 2015 at 11:19 pm
Nostalgic. Lovely tanka.
October 13th, 2015 at 5:42 am
I like the emotional pull of this tanka. As the reader, I can place myself gazing at the stars…
October 13th, 2015 at 1:39 pm
Beautifully touching.
marion
October 14th, 2015 at 8:16 am
Wonderful composition. Many Congratulations!
May 22nd, 2016 at 6:22 pm
Quite wonderful.
"stargazing again
on a moonless night"