after 15 years
i find his address
in his own writing…
stargazing again
on a moonless night
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Sreelatha Nair
A homemaker, who lives in Chennai, a city in Southern India. Have been noticed by passersby near roadside scrubs and bushes engaging with nonhuman beings.
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A fine one Sreelatha- congrats.
__Grand Sreelatha, and while reading your fine verse, this humble haiku was generated; the stars, the snow flakes.
of the years
this fir tree reached the stars
snow flakes
I thank you. _m
after fifteen years
his old address
on the IOU
An elegant tanka full of wistfulness.
Ah, the emotions this generates!
Nostalgic. Lovely tanka.
I like the emotional pull of this tanka. As the reader, I can place myself gazing at the stars…
Beautifully touching.
marion
Wonderful composition. Many Congratulations!
Quite wonderful.
"stargazing again
on a moonless night"