abandoned house in the window a doll without eyes
—Rob Dingman
Issue 15.2 | 30 October 2015
Nice image
A gothic image that's effectively appropriate to the day before Hallowe'en.
Bill Kenney
As doll-maker your haiku especially touched me. It was so easy to picture and my emotions were easily awakened. Thanks for sharing this. o/ Jane
Really like this one!
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cornstalks the haunted house a tinder box
Quite haunting and lonely…beautifully penned.
I'm touched by the juxtaposition of 'window'' and 'eyes'. The house and the doll are similarly desolate. What a strong image!
. abandoned house in the window a doll without eyes
—ROB DINGMAN
Great haiku and I like the choice of the order of the last two lines! . . I've only written two doll haiku myself: .
Forgotten rain the wedding ring left in a doll’s house
Alan Summers Publication Credit: ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK (Japan May 30, 2014) . . Old Curiosity Shop – lacquered dolls out in the mid-day sun
Alan Summers Publications credits: Shamrock, Haiku Journal of the Irish Haiku Society (2007); Shamrock Haiku Journal: 2007 – 2011 by Ed. Anatoly Kudryavitsky (December 2011 ISBN-10: 1470938308 ISBN-13: 978-1470938307 . .
Compelling, stark image, evokes the sense of abandonment beautifully. In response, a little hope …
abandoned doll the scavenging child's eyes light up
This is what i am looking for nice information !!!!
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October 30th, 2015 at 12:08 pm
Nice image
October 30th, 2015 at 12:34 pm
A gothic image that's effectively appropriate to the day before Hallowe'en.
Bill Kenney
October 30th, 2015 at 12:39 pm
As doll-maker your haiku especially touched me. It was so easy to picture and my emotions were easily awakened. Thanks for sharing this.
o/ Jane
October 30th, 2015 at 12:51 pm
Really like this one!
October 30th, 2015 at 2:03 pm
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cornstalks
the haunted house
a tinder box
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October 30th, 2015 at 7:38 pm
Quite haunting and lonely…beautifully penned.
October 31st, 2015 at 4:15 pm
I'm touched by the juxtaposition of 'window'' and 'eyes'. The house and the doll are similarly desolate. What a strong image!
November 1st, 2015 at 4:27 am
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abandoned house
in the window
a doll without eyes
—ROB DINGMAN
Great haiku and I like the choice of the order of the last two lines!
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I've only written two doll haiku myself:
.
Forgotten rain
the wedding ring left
in a doll’s house
Alan Summers
Publication Credit: ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK (Japan May 30, 2014)
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.
Old Curiosity Shop –
lacquered dolls
out in the mid-day sun
Alan Summers
Publications credits: Shamrock, Haiku Journal of the Irish Haiku Society (2007); Shamrock Haiku Journal: 2007 – 2011 by Ed. Anatoly Kudryavitsky (December 2011 ISBN-10: 1470938308 ISBN-13: 978-1470938307
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November 1st, 2015 at 6:47 pm
Compelling, stark image, evokes the sense of abandonment beautifully. In response, a little hope …
abandoned doll
the scavenging child's
eyes light up
November 2nd, 2015 at 4:50 am
This is what i am looking for nice information !!!!