the brittle call of a skylark – still no rain
—Vincent O'Connor
Issue 15.2 | 9 November 2015
Really appreciate the word "brittle."
seed parachutes onto unwatered ground— a fruitless journey
Your haiku, Vincent, generated another look within that hopeful sky _m
the hawk soars below this skyborn gate a rain cloud
The word 'brittle' is an excellent choice to echo the dry season or drought, a really lovely haiku.
black cockatoos coming down from the hills unseasonal rain
Oh, yes – brittle is an inspired word here.
marion
Hi,
Thank you all for your very kind words. It was a huge honour for me to be included in Tinywords.
Vincent.
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November 9th, 2015 at 9:43 am
Really appreciate the word "brittle."
seed parachutes
onto unwatered ground—
a fruitless journey
November 9th, 2015 at 10:28 am
Your haiku, Vincent, generated another look within that hopeful sky _m
the hawk soars
below this skyborn gate
a rain cloud
November 10th, 2015 at 2:39 am
The word 'brittle' is an excellent choice to echo the dry season or drought, a really lovely haiku.
black cockatoos
coming down from the hills
unseasonal rain
November 10th, 2015 at 3:53 pm
Oh, yes – brittle is an inspired word here.
marion
November 11th, 2015 at 3:19 am
Hi,
Thank you all for your very kind words.
It was a huge honour for me to be included in Tinywords.
Vincent.