sleepless ? my window floats through a thousand stars
—Patrick Gillespie
Issue 15.2 | 23 December 2015
This haiku is magical. Well done.
Love this. So beautifully apt.
My thanks to both of you. :-) Starting November 7th, and inspired by —I'm not sure what—I've undertaken writing one haiku a day through November of next year. One a day. More haibun than haiku I suppose.
Yes!
Lovely style! . . Tribute to John O'connor 1949-2015
stars fail to break as long as the sand & moonlight
haiku by Alan Summers n.b. the last two lines are from John's poem Mother & Child (Tiny Gaps, NZPS, 2003) . .
This captures well for me that 'not quite there' feeling when you are on the brink of sleep.
marion
I love it too.
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December 23rd, 2015 at 9:37 am
This haiku is magical. Well done.
December 23rd, 2015 at 1:24 pm
Love this. So beautifully apt.
December 23rd, 2015 at 5:23 pm
My thanks to both of you. :-) Starting November 7th, and inspired by —I'm not sure what—I've undertaken writing one haiku a day through November of next year. One a day. More haibun than haiku I suppose.
December 23rd, 2015 at 5:27 pm
Yes!
December 27th, 2015 at 9:32 am
Lovely style!
.
.
Tribute to John O'connor 1949-2015
stars fail to break
as long as the sand
& moonlight
haiku by Alan Summers
n.b.
the last two lines are from John's poem Mother & Child (Tiny Gaps, NZPS, 2003)
.
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December 29th, 2015 at 8:40 am
This captures well for me that 'not quite there' feeling when you are on the brink of sleep.
marion
December 30th, 2015 at 8:17 pm
I love it too.