Lovely haiku Cherie. I particularly enjoy the strikingly unexpected juxtaposition in the middle line. And it seems to me you have also cleverly matched the format of your verse to the underlying message – you have subverted the "classical" haiku format with 17 syllables, so instead of 5-7-5 you have "over-stretched" the middle line to 8 syllables – a syntactic match for the unrelenting (I read "forced") cheerfulness of the daffodils. Brilliantly and subtly done.
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April 13th, 2016 at 8:57 am
How cute and clever!
You cheered and brightened my day–
Like a daffodil.
April 13th, 2016 at 10:13 am
variegated tulips
the receptionist's smile
equally forced
(A Hundred Gourds 1.1)
April 13th, 2016 at 10:44 am
Lovely!
April 13th, 2016 at 10:57 am
Difficult not to smile, Cherie. Nice. :)
marion
April 13th, 2016 at 11:23 am
Flowers have a way of putting a smile on the face, even when faced with less than cheerful circumstances. A beautiful expression of sentiment!
April 14th, 2016 at 5:09 am
Lovely haiku Cherie. I particularly enjoy the strikingly unexpected juxtaposition in the middle line. And it seems to me you have also cleverly matched the format of your verse to the underlying message – you have subverted the "classical" haiku format with 17 syllables, so instead of 5-7-5 you have "over-stretched" the middle line to 8 syllables – a syntactic match for the unrelenting (I read "forced") cheerfulness of the daffodils. Brilliantly and subtly done.
Strider
June 12th, 2017 at 10:16 pm
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October 9th, 2017 at 6:01 pm
grate collection thanks for sharing
June 7th, 2018 at 12:33 am
great post