pear blossoms another parking ticket for my stolen car
—Deborah P Kolodji
Issue 16.1 | 25 April 2016
The pathos of contemporary life, done with a smile. Good one, Debbie. Bill Kenney
I like how the juxtaposition with ‘pear blossoms’ artfully merges these odd, random surprises into the inevitable rotation of the seasons.
My very small light It burns, but not too brightly It burns just the same
Debrorah,
It's been awhile but I wanted to drop by and tell you I enjoyed your multi-dimensional poem. The ending was certainly surprise. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Congratulations on your publication.
Blessings, Karen
Not exactly manna from heaven, but an excellent haiku, Debbie
I like it.
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April 25th, 2016 at 9:25 am
The pathos of contemporary life, done with a smile. Good one, Debbie. Bill Kenney
April 25th, 2016 at 9:59 am
I like how the juxtaposition with ‘pear blossoms’ artfully merges these odd, random surprises into the inevitable rotation of the seasons.
April 25th, 2016 at 12:57 pm
My very small light
It burns, but not too brightly
It burns just the same
April 25th, 2016 at 1:19 pm
Debrorah,
It's been awhile but I wanted to drop by and tell you I enjoyed your multi-dimensional poem. The ending was certainly surprise. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Congratulations on your publication.
Blessings,
Karen
April 25th, 2016 at 1:43 pm
Not exactly manna from heaven, but an excellent haiku, Debbie
April 25th, 2016 at 2:17 pm
I like it.