all the kids
on my lap


9 Responses

  1. MaryJo Says:

    Like the way you formatted the poem–made me laugh.

  2. Garry Says:

    Nice surprise!

    redundancy museum
    all the white-haired tourists
    clocking out

  3. Janice Says:

    Tickled my fancy! A haiku for the 21st century.

  4. Valentina Says:

    nice twist at the end

  5. Daniel Wilcox Says:

    Wonderful gentle irony.:-) Experienced this over the weekend with my 6-year-old granddaughter, only it was with my cell phone and she was taking movies of me and selfies of herself:-)

  6. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Yes! So true. Gave me a laugh, and then I sighed.

  7. kjmunro Says:

    Thanks for the kind words, everyone! One week until Haiku Canada Weekend 2016!
    from the sunny Yukon, kj

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:


  9. hammerandtongs Says:

    Wonderful. Turn our expectations inside out.

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