in the pond
the face of autumn


12 Responses

  1. MaryJo Says:

    The face of autumn not quite there but suggesting itself. Like this a lot, Don.

  2. Don Says:

    Thank you, MaryJo. Don

  3. hammerandtongs Says:

    Such a very beautiful image. "the face of autumn"–color-changing branches, falling leave,s reflected in the rippling waters of the pond.

  4. Don Says:

    Thanks, h&t … Don. Very kind.

  5. jill Says:

    funny to have autumn around summer but creative for sure

  6. don Says:

    Cheers, Jill. Don

  7. Madhuri Pillai Says:

    Beautiful! Love ‘the face of Autumn rippling’ Very vivid!

  8. mschoenburg1 Says:

    mute swan
    circles the pond
    ripples abound~~~

  9. Magyar Says:

    The tildes add so well to the ripples, as those ripples follow the swan. _m

  10. Jada Says:

    Jada where you are you in my shoe

  11. ed markowski Says:

    I've entirely forgotten how to write small poems and there for I've become
    forgotten except by god thank god

  12. martin1223 Says:

    alone a patch of ripples disappears

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