campfire I disappear with the moth
—Jeff Hoagland
Issue 16.1 | 11 July 2016
Lovely!
__In my humble thought, I compliment your fine haiku Jeff; from my long ago scribble book, I leave this parallel.
listen among the silent flowers a butterfly
_m
Such a good visual–it is a small painting.
. campfire I disappear with the moth
—JEFF HOAGLAND . . I really like this!
. . A non-haikai stanza from a haibun entitled Crow Star:
a susurrus of moths around fire that flickers on
Alan Summers Anthology Credit: Journeys 2015, An Anthology of International Haibun Ed. Angelee Deodhar ISBN 978-1515359876 . .
Oooh – I found this quite dark!
Great atmosphere, Jeff.
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July 11th, 2016 at 9:01 am
Lovely!
July 11th, 2016 at 9:18 am
__In my humble thought, I compliment your fine haiku Jeff; from my long ago scribble book, I leave this parallel.
listen
among the silent flowers
a butterfly
_m
July 11th, 2016 at 8:18 pm
Such a good visual–it is a small painting.
July 12th, 2016 at 9:22 am
.
campfire
I disappear
with the moth
—JEFF HOAGLAND
.
.
I really like this!
.
.
A non-haikai stanza from a haibun entitled Crow Star:
a susurrus of moths
around fire that flickers on
Alan Summers
Anthology Credit: Journeys 2015, An Anthology of International Haibun
Ed. Angelee Deodhar ISBN 978-1515359876
.
.
July 13th, 2016 at 2:05 pm
Oooh – I found this quite dark!
Great atmosphere, Jeff.
marion