pooling where the creek bends fish
—Dave Read
Issue 16.1 | 12 July 2016
. cooling where the creek bends fish
—DAVE READ
Wonderful one line haiku, love where the creek bends fish!
* * soul her fish fingers to the second knuckle
Alan Summers Publication Credits: Roadrunner 12.3 MASKS 4 (2012)
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leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish
Alan Summers From the sequence: White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013) .
Really enjoy playing with this striking minimalist haiku. And great last word – single syllable, concrete. Just lovely.
Lovely
Mind bending. It has that wonderful quality of stimulating the imagination with it being possible to pin down it's meaning.
Thanks everyone! I am grateful for your kind comments.
Love it, Dave! :)
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July 12th, 2016 at 9:16 am
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cooling where the creek bends fish
—DAVE READ
Wonderful one line haiku, love where the creek bends fish!
*
*
soul her fish fingers to the second knuckle
Alan Summers
Publication Credits: Roadrunner 12.3 MASKS 4 (2012)
*
*
leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish
Alan Summers
From the sequence: White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems
Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013)
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July 12th, 2016 at 10:13 am
Really enjoy playing with this striking minimalist haiku. And great last word – single syllable, concrete. Just lovely.
July 12th, 2016 at 1:09 pm
Lovely
July 12th, 2016 at 1:33 pm
Mind bending. It has that wonderful quality of stimulating the imagination with it being possible to pin down it's meaning.
July 12th, 2016 at 6:15 pm
Thanks everyone! I am grateful for your kind comments.
July 13th, 2016 at 2:04 pm
Love it, Dave! :)
marion