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1. Magyar Says:
   July 15th, 2016 at 2:02 pm

   __Your well posed verse Martin, it caused this, my humble reverberation. _m

   heavy seas
   as this full moon pulls the tide
   thunder sounds

2. martin1223 Says:
   July 15th, 2016 at 11:09 pm

   Thanks Magyar for your comment and poem.

3. Peter Newton Says:
   July 16th, 2016 at 11:25 am

   groundswell — or as the poet has it here: "ground swell"– an interesting word or phrase

   in both definitions–either in popular support or a wave in the ocean

   the common denominator is the unexpected

   which is how the day moon often feels to me when I glimpse its presence

   always there–it seems–tone on tone, half-hidden

   that it "draws closer" adds a surprise element to the unexpectedness

   of course, makes me think of the political atmosphere of these times . . .

4. martin1223 Says:
   July 17th, 2016 at 4:08 am

   Thanks for your interesting comment, Peter.

5. janewilliams Says:
   July 17th, 2016 at 8:24 pm

   Took me back to my childhood and those first questions about the sky …

   daytime moon – my first question why

6. martin1223 Says:
   July 17th, 2016 at 9:33 pm

   Thanks Jane for your comment.

7. marykendall Says:
   August 15th, 2016 at 8:01 am

   There is a magic in the day moon, and you've captured that so beautifully.

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