It sent me to the Ten Commandments right off the bat: “Thou shalt have no graven images before thee, etc.”
Nature understands the divinity better than we do.
Love it, Lorin! I particularly like the way 'walls' and 'shapes' can be nouns or verbs. For me, that's what provides multiple readings and helps to make this monoku so effective.
September 27th, 2016 at 9:19 am
Apt; feflections continue to reflect.
September 27th, 2016 at 9:24 am
"r" not -f-_! Of course, I'm the only one that makes errors. Smile_! _m
September 27th, 2016 at 9:22 am
Beautiful haiku, Lorin!
September 27th, 2016 at 10:16 am
It sent me to the Ten Commandments right off the bat: “Thou shalt have no graven images before thee, etc.”
Nature understands the divinity better than we do.
September 27th, 2016 at 10:41 am
Very beautiful!
What a universal language nature speaks in !!
September 27th, 2016 at 11:49 am
Awe. That's how it feels to read your haiku, Lorin.
September 27th, 2016 at 2:19 pm
Spot on, Lorin! :)
marion
September 28th, 2016 at 6:11 am
BTW this ku would sit well with some of those in the late, great Jane Reichold's collection 'Naked Rock'
September 27th, 2016 at 2:33 pm
Wonderful Lorin, a different image with each rereading, endless possibilities …
September 27th, 2016 at 7:37 pm
Love it, Lorin! I particularly like the way 'walls' and 'shapes' can be nouns or verbs. For me, that's what provides multiple readings and helps to make this monoku so effective.
Susan
November 5th, 2016 at 6:08 am
Posts like this brhgetin up my day. Thanks for taking the time.