__ When this fine view refers to salmon Marietta, one remembers that by achieving their up-river goal, their life ends; but their life does not end as such… it regenerates. Grand sight of this Nature's Pathway, Marietta.
reddened salmon
span this white water course
a bear waits
September 29th, 2016 at 9:46 am
What a lark.
Thub dub, fly
Jan
September 29th, 2016 at 10:03 am
catch in my throat
a salmon falls back
again and again
September 29th, 2016 at 3:46 pm
I experience this every fall when the salmon return. You've captured it so beautifully. Thank you!
September 29th, 2016 at 9:06 pm
Very nice!
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Migrate dear fish
Stay alive
FAO
September 30th, 2016 at 4:00 am
I have never experienced a salmon return, but this monoku immediately made me see one. Highly effective.
marion
September 30th, 2016 at 7:52 am
__ When this fine view refers to salmon Marietta, one remembers that by achieving their up-river goal, their life ends; but their life does not end as such… it regenerates. Grand sight of this Nature's Pathway, Marietta.
reddened salmon
span this white water course
a bear waits
_m
September 30th, 2016 at 5:26 pm
This speaks to me of courage and vulnerability. Wonderful image Marietta!
October 3rd, 2016 at 10:00 am
moon run
into the wide mouth
of the river
October 14th, 2016 at 10:22 pm
This poem is an example why I like one-liners very much! Thanks for sharing!
November 11th, 2016 at 8:40 pm
Is that really all there is to it because that’d be flagaergbstinb.