election day
kids in the schoolyard
playing tag

 

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Bill Kenney

Bill Kenney has been writing haiku since 2004. His work has appeared in leading haiku journals, and he is the author of three collections of haiku and senryu - the earth pushes back, 2016, senior admission,2018, and keep walking, (forthcoming from Red Moon Press).

8 thoughts on “”

  1. Chief, I sense and agree as you have written here, 'tis the kids that are the most important; the schoolyard swings.
    __ Consider… though we cannot change the weather, we must control the way in which we swing into its wind. _m

    full swings
    sway into the colder winds
    today's teacher

  2. .
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    election day
    kids in the schoolyard
    playing tag

    —BILL KENNEY
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    At any other time this could be simply read on a literal level where the children have no need to worry about election results.

    Now 'tag' comes into its own, and we will see who is tagged, and how.

    Subtle layers from a master haiku/senryu writer.

    warm regards,

    Alan

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