first kite
learning to read
the wind
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Rachel Sutcliffe
Rachel Sutcliffe has suffered from a serious immune disorder since her early twenties. Over the years writing has been a great form of therapy, it's kept her from going insane. She is an active member of the British Haiku Society and several online writing groups. She has been published in various anthologies and journals, both in print and online, including: Failed Haiku, Prune Juice , Hedgerow, The Heron's Nest, Cattails and Wild Plum.
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Lovely. Thank you.
Beautiful!
letting go
my mother's
apron strings
I love the idea of reading the wind, Rachel!
marion
Reading the wind; as it turns its own pages; "arthritic fingers."
__Just the union of two ideas__
Just gorgeous!
freewheeling – on the downhill run – my windswept smile
Beautiful, your first and second line are quite novel! It can never leave my mind.
A wonderful haiku, thank you
Grand view Rachel_!
__ We learn from nature that ultimate teacher, and within our nature, we can teach ourselves.
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first kite
learning to read
the wind
—RACHEL SUTCLIFFE
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Learning to read the wind, great phrase! Yes, our first things where we become aware of nature. :-)
warm regards,
Alan