first kite
learning to read
the wind

9 Responses

  1. MaryJo Says:

    Lovely. Thank you.

  2. barbara a taylor Says:


    letting go
    my mother's
    apron strings

  3. Marion Clarke Says:

    I love the idea of reading the wind, Rachel!


  4. magyar Says:

    Reading the wind; as it turns its own pages; "arthritic fingers."
    __Just the union of two ideas__

  5. janewilliams Says:

    Just gorgeous!

    freewheeling – on the downhill run – my windswept smile

  6. Adjei Agyei-Baah Says:

    Beautiful, your first and second line are quite novel! It can never leave my mind.

  7. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    A wonderful haiku, thank you

  8. magyar Says:

    Grand view Rachel_!
    __ We learn from nature that ultimate teacher, and within our nature, we can teach ourselves.

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    first kite
    learning to read
    the wind

    Learning to read the wind, great phrase! Yes, our first things where we become aware of nature. :-)

    warm regards,


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