I loved this when I first read it here, and it continues to grow in me. We often use/vocalise the American expression "period" which means an end stop (full stop) in grammar to imprint our verbal statement even more. I can see saying "ellipsis" could also catch on!
Very moody haiku, terrific work, fresh and modern.
This one took me by surprise when I first read it. You really said it all…and I think a lot of us find it resonates perfectly with us. A really good one, Shloka. :)
November 22nd, 2016 at 9:57 am
Nice one.
November 22nd, 2016 at 8:21 pm
Thank you, Bob! :)
November 22nd, 2016 at 10:14 am
I do that . . . !
November 22nd, 2016 at 8:20 pm
I'm glad I'm not alone, Marilyn! :)
November 23rd, 2016 at 6:42 am
Good one, Shloka
Unexpected end :)
November 23rd, 2016 at 6:46 am
Thanks a lot, Kala! :) :)
November 23rd, 2016 at 10:28 am
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meaning what i don’t say ellipsis
—SHLOKA SHANKAR
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I loved this when I first read it here, and it continues to grow in me. We often use/vocalise the American expression "period" which means an end stop (full stop) in grammar to imprint our verbal statement even more. I can see saying "ellipsis" could also catch on!
Very moody haiku, terrific work, fresh and modern.
warm regards,
Alan
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November 27th, 2016 at 7:32 pm
This one resonates, especially the first word. I keep coming back to it.
November 28th, 2016 at 9:14 am
This one took me by surprise when I first read it. You really said it all…and I think a lot of us find it resonates perfectly with us. A really good one, Shloka. :)