mourning no one else at the all-way stop
—LeRoy Gorman
Issue 16.2 | 3 January 2017
The key is 'mourning', nicely seen Leroy; this, an echo at the crossroads.
mourning even this round-a-bout wont return
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__ At least then, with no one else there, one may exhaust internal pressures without being labeled a caitiff.
How beautiful, the "mourning," the image of compass points at the 4-way stop, the crossroads, the choices to be made, the utter aloneness of it. I also get the sense of someone wondering what purpose there is in going on. Very nice poem.
Such complexity in only nine words. Wonderful.
Who is this Gary Michael Dault and why hasn't Mrs Thumper sat him down for a chat? What kind of JG troll goes to a haiku group to be rude?
I'll chat with him. This is not a workshop. Above all, we want people to be respectful and polite.
Thanks Dylan
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January 3rd, 2017 at 9:57 am
The key is 'mourning', nicely seen Leroy; this, an echo at the crossroads.
mourning
even this round-a-bout
wont return
_m
January 3rd, 2017 at 10:32 am
__ At least then, with no one else there, one may exhaust internal pressures without being labeled a caitiff.
January 3rd, 2017 at 11:58 am
How beautiful, the "mourning," the image of compass points at the 4-way stop, the crossroads, the choices to be made, the utter aloneness of it. I also get the sense of someone wondering what purpose there is in going on. Very nice poem.
January 4th, 2017 at 9:27 am
Such complexity in only nine words. Wonderful.
January 4th, 2017 at 11:07 am
Who is this Gary Michael Dault and why hasn't Mrs Thumper sat him down for a chat? What kind of JG troll goes to a haiku group to be rude?
January 10th, 2017 at 9:24 pm
I'll chat with him. This is not a workshop. Above all, we want people to be respectful and polite.
January 11th, 2017 at 12:42 pm
Thanks Dylan