blossoms . . . the dog leap-curves toward the frisbee
(originally published in Frogpond,Vol. XXX, No. 2, 2007)
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 16.2 | 20 January 2017
Kala, Lots of graceful action in L2 and L3. And the blossoms as a backdrop reverberate Spring in the park. Well Done. Jan Benson
Thanks a ton, Jen Happy you like this ku :))
An action-packed spring day beautifully caught, Kala! The dog leap-curves upwards, towards the gliding frisbee, and I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences.
Thanks, Padma. Wow! Beautiful comment. _/\_
__ In your painting Kala, among your blossoms, I imagined a hummingbird that quickly evaded that frisbee's flight. A minimal echo, _m:
hummingbird escapes this spinning frisbee a dog's bark
Thanks, Magyar … I like your ku, too.
Beautifully 'drawn' …
Thanks a lot, Jane Williams. Happy you like this ku
Lots of fun!
Here's one I forgot I wrote that got picked up by a Russian site:
the station approach a man and his dog training for the world cup match
Alan Summers . .
Great movement in this, Kala – and full of the joys of spring!
marion
I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences. Thank post
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January 20th, 2017 at 2:03 pm
Kala,
Lots of graceful action in L2 and L3.
And the blossoms as a backdrop reverberate Spring in the park.
Well Done.
Jan Benson
January 21st, 2017 at 10:28 am
Thanks a ton, Jen
Happy you like this ku :))
January 21st, 2017 at 10:54 am
An action-packed spring day beautifully caught, Kala! The dog leap-curves upwards, towards the gliding frisbee, and I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences.
January 23rd, 2017 at 8:36 am
Thanks, Padma.
Wow! Beautiful comment.
_/\_
January 22nd, 2017 at 8:14 am
__ In your painting Kala, among your blossoms, I imagined a hummingbird that quickly evaded that frisbee's flight. A minimal echo, _m:
hummingbird
escapes this spinning frisbee
a dog's bark
January 23rd, 2017 at 8:35 am
Thanks, Magyar …
I like your ku, too.
January 22nd, 2017 at 4:03 pm
Beautifully 'drawn' …
January 23rd, 2017 at 8:38 am
Thanks a lot, Jane Williams.
Happy you like this ku
January 23rd, 2017 at 5:17 pm
Lots of fun!
Here's one I forgot I wrote that got picked up by a Russian site:
the station approach
a man and his dog training
for the world cup match
Alan Summers
.
.
February 2nd, 2017 at 4:44 pm
Great movement in this, Kala – and full of the joys of spring!
marion
April 17th, 2017 at 2:34 am
I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences. Thank post