birds drift over the meadow summer-deep the distant pulse of a tambourine
—Jenny Ward Angyal
Issue 17.2 | 19 October 2017
Lovely tanka evoking that lazy summer feel …
. birds drift over the meadow summer-deep the distant pulse of a tambourine
—JENNY WARD ANGYAL
Love the 'turning' in line three, and the atmosphere generated by the last line. Wonderful!
warm regards, Alan
"drift"? and "pulse" play together very well
Lovely, Jenny. This instantly made me think of an outdoor summer music festival. :)
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October 20th, 2017 at 2:35 am
Lovely tanka evoking that lazy summer feel …
October 20th, 2017 at 5:20 am
.
birds drift
over the meadow
summer-deep
the distant pulse
of a tambourine
—JENNY WARD ANGYAL
Love the 'turning' in line three, and the atmosphere generated by the last line. Wonderful!
warm regards,
Alan
October 20th, 2017 at 1:27 pm
"drift"? and "pulse" play together very well
October 21st, 2017 at 3:02 pm
Lovely, Jenny. This instantly made me think of an outdoor summer music festival. :)
marion