bullet points
on gun control
Orion’s belt


12 Responses

  1. Garry Eaton Says:

    Great jux.
    the NRA
    will have its way
    Orion's belt

  2. Johnny Baranski Says:

    Thanks Garry.

  3. All Tripp Says:

    domestic abuse loophole
    guns to burn
    walk the horizon

  4. Michelle Schaefer Says:

    Nicely done Johnny. We need to be writing more of this! CHEERS!

  5. Johnny Baranski Says:

    Thanks Michelle.

  6. Susan Says:

    Very effective, Johnny. I'll be seeing Orion's belt in a different light.

  7. Doug Says:

    Too many failures need resolution; too many failed answers.

    lives matter
    bullets bombs or rental trucks

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Very effective, Johnny.


  9. Johnny Baranski Says:

    Thanks Marion.

  10. Tofel Says:

    Johny, Johny
    and johny,
    I wen't nuts over this poem
    and the neighbours,
    did as well

  11. Melinda Says:

    Very powerful poem.

  12. Alan Summers Says:

    bullet points
    on gun control
    Orion’s belt


    It is fascinating how so much weapon terms are included in everyday life, from those bullet points, to children being given toys based on weapons that kill other humans.

    The use of killing weapons pervades us, including this one, which is more allegorical than actual:

    cherry mist
    the gun you pointed
    as I said I love you

    Alan Summers
    Publication credits: Symmetry Pebbles (2011)

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