rain on plums
the honk of geese
moving on


5 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    __ This Pratima, travels and honors all avenues of haiku, a lofty verse_! _m

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    rain on plums
    the honk of geese
    moving on



    Wonderful mix of sounds, from nearby (on the ground, as well as from the air) the sound of rain plinked on fruit, and in the distance (and air) the geese overhead.

    Beautiful on all counts!
    Here are some geese from Amsterdam (Holland, Europe):

    museum quarter
    the midnight blue 
    of geese

    Alan Summers
    Modern Haiku volume 48.3 Autumn 2017

  3. Meredith Says:

    Just lovely. I’m glad for the quiet beauty that this poem brought to my day.

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    There is a real sense of oneness with nature and the cycle of life in this haiku. Quietly beautiful.


  5. annagrace9 Says:

    Alan, Seaview, Meredith, Magyar, thank you all,

    the images Alan are dear to me and you caught the sounds very well.

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