Supermoon
the night sky
surrenders

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Issue 18.1 | 27 April 2018

8 Responses

  1. Ronald Craig Says:
    April 27th, 2018 at 12:58 pm

    So big, so bright, so beautiful even the stars “dim” in deference! A natural phenomenon captured so well here. Nice poem, Sam.

    Ronald Craig
    Batavia, OH
    USA

  2. Pravat Says:
    April 27th, 2018 at 11:40 pm

    Nice ku with the art of juxtaposition (renso).

    red moon
    a cosmic painting
    in progress

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Haiku Bandit Society, April 3, 2012

    *****
    super moon–
    the girls busy playing
    basketball

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Haiku News, Vol.1 No. 30, Aug 6, 2012

    *****
    357000 km
    from blue earth to supermoon–
    journey in darkness

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Asahi Haikuist Network, 21.09.2012

  3. janewilliams Says:
    April 28th, 2018 at 3:13 am

    And how could it not? Lovely.

    tonight my dreams within reach – supermoon

  4. Jeff Hoagland Says:
    April 28th, 2018 at 5:19 am

    Look! Up in the sky . . . Sam, this is perfect! Thank you

  5. Magyar Says:
    April 28th, 2018 at 7:33 am

    __ Supermoon, nifty; here, my added humble thought.

    cut and carve
    these wooden figures dance
    moonlight

  6. Sam Bateman Says:
    April 29th, 2018 at 12:22 pm

    Thanks to everyone for their comments and sharing their poems. Sam

  7. Anitha Varma Says:
    May 1st, 2018 at 10:47 pm

    Very visual! Enjoyed this..

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
    May 3rd, 2018 at 1:08 am

    Ha – of course it does – no competition! :)

    Nice one, Sam.

    marion

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