My appreciation to each of you for your encouraging comments. It's always gratifying to know that something we write actually works for others. Thank you so much!
I really enjoyed the wonderful juxtaposition of the mind and nature, and it’s quickness of words matched the essence of our minds and rabbits. Both deep and humorous.
My apologies for not getting back to this sooner. I certainly appreciate all your comments and am delighted the juxtaposition works for everyone. Not tell WHERE those thoughts and rabbits will go next. <smile>
Thanks again!
May 7th, 2018 at 8:21 am
Absolutely lovely, Susan!
Extremely well done.
May 7th, 2018 at 8:34 am
busy mind
May 7th, 2018 at 8:46 am
A wonderful ku, Susan, with thoughtful juxtaposition (renso).
spider web–
my thought caught
in between
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Under the Basho, Inaugural Issue, Vol.1.1 Autumn 2013
May 7th, 2018 at 9:32 am
Wonderful,Susan!
May 7th, 2018 at 9:33 am
Very nice!
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my thoughts
this way and that
wild rabbits
—SUSAN CONSTABLE
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Works wonderfully well, and beautifully and magically as one line:
my thoughts this way and that wild rabbits
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flickering lights
the rabbit disappears
down an Alice Hole
and me? I’m all alone
a right thing done wrong
Alan Summers
Blithe Spirit 26.2 (Summer 2016)
May 7th, 2018 at 11:26 am
Oh, I really like this.
May 7th, 2018 at 8:34 pm
My appreciation to each of you for your encouraging comments. It's always gratifying to know that something we write actually works for others. Thank you so much!
May 7th, 2018 at 10:26 pm
I really enjoyed the wonderful juxtaposition of the mind and nature, and it’s quickness of words matched the essence of our minds and rabbits. Both deep and humorous.
May 8th, 2018 at 12:09 am
Love it, Susan – the jux is inspired! This gave me a smile.
marion
May 8th, 2018 at 4:36 pm
Oh – yours too?
night wind neither here nor there my thoughts
Well done, Susan.
Best, Bill Kenney
May 9th, 2018 at 4:30 am
Lovely….Thoughts flitting from one subject to another, like wild rabbits…Can see this so clearly..
Anita.
May 10th, 2018 at 11:36 am
My apologies for not getting back to this sooner. I certainly appreciate all your comments and am delighted the juxtaposition works for everyone. Not tell WHERE those thoughts and rabbits will go next. <smile>
Thanks again!