trying to put a number on it skipping stone
—Jeff Hoagland
Issue 18.1 | 9 May 2018
Love stone-skipping poem!
six windows two tellers the line grows longer
__ Nifty Jeff: The sailor / flier, goes back to earth from which it came. This, an instant echo.
ring after ring this stone charts its course earth sailor
Great haiku, Brings me into the moment. I can hear the number of skips (almost).
Wonderful poem.
Periodic Table the stepping stones I rearrange
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Failed Haiku, June Issue 2017
Light hearted and lovely!
marion
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May 9th, 2018 at 9:38 am
Love stone-skipping poem!
six windows
two tellers
the line grows longer
May 9th, 2018 at 1:59 pm
__ Nifty Jeff: The sailor / flier, goes back to earth from which it came. This, an instant echo.
ring after ring
this stone charts its course
earth sailor
May 9th, 2018 at 8:46 pm
Great haiku,
Brings me into the moment.
I can hear the number of skips (almost).
May 9th, 2018 at 10:04 pm
Wonderful poem.
Periodic Table
the stepping stones
I rearrange
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Failed Haiku, June Issue 2017
May 17th, 2018 at 8:35 am
Light hearted and lovely!
marion