shrapnel scars
her fingers tracing
Orion
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Mark E. Brager
Mark E. Brager lives with his wife and son in Columbia, MD, just outside of Washington, DC, where he works as a public affairs executive. His poems have appeared in haijinx, Prune Juice, Haiku Pix Review, The Heron's Nest, Notes from the Gean, and DailyHaiku.
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Oh! This is very striking, Mark.
marion
Thank you marion…
Terrific—well done.
Thank you…
A splendid juxtaposition!
full moon
the women veils
her scars
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Brass Bell Haiku, October 2014
Thank you Pravat…
Thank you Pravat…
A splendid juxtaposition!
full moon
the woman veils
her scars
Brass Bell Haiku, October 2014
Oh! There is typo. Please read 'women' as 'woman'
Wonderful and poignant senryu, Mark! It's also Today's Feature at MyHaikuPond.com :)