leaving no will the wind
—Jeffrey Ferrara
Issue 18.1 | 5 June 2018
I like this so much, for its meaning/s and its form. A perfectly structured monostich haiku that manages to be full of poetry despite being only 5 words.
I like this
nice
Well played!
Will-o-the-wisp
__ The reader's will, explores… so well seen, Jeffery; the small, builds all. _m
Nicely crafted. Concise and thoughtful poem.
Eiffel tower– the wind bends the other way
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Frogpond, Winter Issue, 37:1, 2013
wishing flags– the wind carries her emotion
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Whispers, 16 Sept 2016
morning wind gently embraces me her tender voice from a distant, quite unknown, keeps me listening time and again
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Cattails, September 2016
Well crafted.
Que sera, sera…
marion
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June 5th, 2018 at 10:52 am
I like this so much, for its meaning/s and its form. A perfectly structured monostich haiku that manages to be full of poetry despite being only 5 words.
June 5th, 2018 at 7:18 pm
I like this
June 5th, 2018 at 9:00 pm
nice
June 5th, 2018 at 11:57 pm
Well played!
June 6th, 2018 at 5:28 am
Will-o-the-wisp
__ The reader's will, explores… so well seen, Jeffery; the small, builds all. _m
June 6th, 2018 at 7:47 am
Nicely crafted. Concise and thoughtful poem.
Eiffel tower–
the wind bends
the other way
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Frogpond, Winter Issue, 37:1, 2013
wishing flags–
the wind carries
her emotion
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Whispers, 16 Sept 2016
morning wind
gently embraces me
her tender voice
from a distant, quite unknown,
keeps me listening time and again
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Cattails, September 2016
June 12th, 2018 at 6:27 am
Well crafted.
Que sera, sera…
marion