leaving no will the wind Published by Jeffrey Ferrara Jeffrey Ferrara is an haiku apprentice living in Worcester, Massachusetts. View all posts by Jeffrey Ferrara
I like this so much, for its meaning/s and its form. A perfectly structured monostich haiku that manages to be full of poetry despite being only 5 words. Reply
Will-o-the-wisp __ The reader's will, explores… so well seen, Jeffery; the small, builds all. _m Reply
Nicely crafted. Concise and thoughtful poem. Eiffel tower– the wind bends the other way Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Frogpond, Winter Issue, 37:1, 2013 wishing flags– the wind carries her emotion Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Whispers, 16 Sept 2016 morning wind gently embraces me her tender voice from a distant, quite unknown, keeps me listening time and again Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Cattails, September 2016 Reply
I like this so much, for its meaning/s and its form. A perfectly structured monostich haiku that manages to be full of poetry despite being only 5 words.
I like this
nice
Well played!
Will-o-the-wisp
__ The reader's will, explores… so well seen, Jeffery; the small, builds all. _m
Nicely crafted. Concise and thoughtful poem.
Eiffel tower–
the wind bends
the other way
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Frogpond, Winter Issue, 37:1, 2013
wishing flags–
the wind carries
her emotion
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Whispers, 16 Sept 2016
morning wind
gently embraces me
her tender voice
from a distant, quite unknown,
keeps me listening time and again
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Cattails, September 2016
Well crafted.
Que sera, sera…
marion