opening night …
the stars arrive
right on time


6 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    Imagination aroused, nifty Sam.
    __ One could, as do I, see the "stars" arriving upon the night's stage; natures play. _m

    act one
    overseen by the night stars
    natures play

  2. Pravat Says:

    Beautiful ku.

    early dawn–
    millions of stars
    in dark

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: EarthRise 2015: Years of Light, Haiku Foundation, 16.4.2015

  3. Helen Buckingham Says:

    stretch limo night
    with stars

    (The Mainichi, 6th Aug. 2016)

  4. Bruce Feingold Says:

    Really lovely!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This is such a beautiful, upbeat ku.

  6. Sam Bateman Says:

    Thanks to everyone for their comments and sharing poems—very much appreciated.

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