summer’s end the skin slips off the last marshmallow
—Susan Mallernee
Issue 18.1 | 25 July 2018
A melting softness… and a slip from one state to another. Perfect.
A splendid haiku that beautifully captures the essence of the season. Well done!
I love this haiku. You?ve captured an entire summer, and even an entire childhood of memories! Brava!
An interesting ku!
summer solstice– the long light shrinks from my windowsill
Pravat Kumar Padhy A Hundred Gourds, 3:4 September Issue, 2014
Indian summer buffaloes step into a thin pond
Pravat Kumar Padhy Simply Haiku, Summer 2012, Vol.10 No.1
Wonderful! I can see it, smell it, taste it, feel it… Love it! Mimi
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July 25th, 2018 at 10:07 am
A melting softness… and a slip from one state to another. Perfect.
July 25th, 2018 at 10:28 am
A splendid haiku that beautifully captures the essence of the season. Well done!
July 25th, 2018 at 1:29 pm
I love this haiku. You?ve captured an entire summer, and even an entire childhood of memories! Brava!
July 25th, 2018 at 8:31 pm
An interesting ku!
summer solstice–
the long light shrinks from
my windowsill
Pravat Kumar Padhy
A Hundred Gourds, 3:4 September Issue, 2014
Indian summer
buffaloes step into
a thin pond
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Simply Haiku, Summer 2012, Vol.10 No.1
July 28th, 2018 at 7:52 am
Wonderful!
I can see it, smell it, taste it, feel it…
Love it!
Mimi