summer’s end the skin slips off the last marshmallow Published by Susan Mallernee Susan Mallernee is a painter and lover of poetry-especially haiku. She hopes to become very good at it someday. View all posts by Susan Mallernee
I love this haiku. You?ve captured an entire summer, and even an entire childhood of memories! Brava! Reply
An interesting ku! summer solstice– the long light shrinks from my windowsill Pravat Kumar Padhy A Hundred Gourds, 3:4 September Issue, 2014 Indian summer buffaloes step into a thin pond Pravat Kumar Padhy Simply Haiku, Summer 2012, Vol.10 No.1 Reply
A melting softness… and a slip from one state to another. Perfect.
A splendid haiku that beautifully captures the essence of the season. Well done!
I love this haiku. You?ve captured an entire summer, and even an entire childhood of memories! Brava!
An interesting ku!
summer solstice–
the long light shrinks from
my windowsill
Pravat Kumar Padhy
A Hundred Gourds, 3:4 September Issue, 2014
Indian summer
buffaloes step into
a thin pond
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Simply Haiku, Summer 2012, Vol.10 No.1
Wonderful!
I can see it, smell it, taste it, feel it…
Love it!
Mimi