I like how you choose the present continuous so it feels like an extended Indian Summer as well as an hour or two just messing around chasing a fly with the cat!
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colour book the cat becomes marmalade
Alan Summers
Right Hand Pointing issue 95 h a i k u edition (February 2016)
edited by Eric Burke
October 9th, 2018 at 8:34 am
I love how playfully you capture the moment.
October 9th, 2018 at 6:03 pm
Great! Perhaps consider changing "chasing" to chase.
our cat catapults
the sofa
sayonara moth
October 9th, 2018 at 7:07 pm
Grin.
October 10th, 2018 at 1:07 am
Indian summer
the cat and I chasing
the same fly
—MARIE LOUISE MUNRO
Delightful!
I like how you choose the present continuous so it feels like an extended Indian Summer as well as an hour or two just messing around chasing a fly with the cat!
.
colour book the cat becomes marmalade
Alan Summers
Right Hand Pointing issue 95 h a i k u edition (February 2016)
edited by Eric Burke
October 10th, 2018 at 3:46 am
What a sense of joy. Thank you for this.
October 11th, 2018 at 6:48 pm
Thanks Gaby, Alan, Jean, papagreenbean and pbergonzi!