Indian summer
the cat and I chasing
the same fly

9 Responses

  1. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    I love how playfully you capture the moment.

  2. papagreenbean Says:

    Great! Perhaps consider changing "chasing" to chase.

    our cat catapults
    the sofa
    sayonara moth

  3. pbergonzi Says:


  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Indian summer
    the cat and I chasing
    the same fly



    I like how you choose the present continuous so it feels like an extended Indian Summer as well as an hour or two just messing around chasing a fly with the cat!

    colour book the cat becomes marmalade

    Alan Summers
    Right Hand Pointing  issue 95 h a i k u edition (February 2016) 
    edited by Eric Burke

  5. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    What a sense of joy. Thank you for this.

  6. Marie Munro Says:

    Thanks Gaby, Alan, Jean, papagreenbean and pbergonzi!

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Light hearted and lovely!


  8. martin1223 Says:

    heat the bumble bee faces me

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