Marie Louise Munro has published poetry in various publications around the world, including The Haiku Calendar and Red Moon Anthology. She holds a Master in Fine Arts degree in Creative Writing from the University of Notre Dame and a Bachelor of Arts degree in English from UCLA. She lives in Los Angeles with her fianc? and three cats.
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I like how you choose the present continuous so it feels like an extended Indian Summer as well as an hour or two just messing around chasing a fly with the cat!
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colour book the cat becomes marmalade
Alan Summers
Right Hand Pointing issue 95 h a i k u edition (February 2016)
edited by Eric Burke
I feel your words would complement the art I do quite well. Please take a look at my site see if the content fits what you’re writing again great work!
I love how playfully you capture the moment.
Great! Perhaps consider changing "chasing" to chase.
our cat catapults
the sofa
sayonara moth
Grin.
Indian summer
the cat and I chasing
the same fly
—MARIE LOUISE MUNRO
Delightful!
I like how you choose the present continuous so it feels like an extended Indian Summer as well as an hour or two just messing around chasing a fly with the cat!
.
colour book the cat becomes marmalade
Alan Summers
Right Hand Pointing issue 95 h a i k u edition (February 2016)
edited by Eric Burke
What a sense of joy. Thank you for this.
Thanks Gaby, Alan, Jean, papagreenbean and pbergonzi!
Light hearted and lovely!
marion
heat the bumble bee faces me
I feel your words would complement the art I do quite well. Please take a look at my site see if the content fits what you’re writing again great work!