first raindrop
on the lake
the monk’s prayer gong

6 Responses

  1. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Love the resonance of these sound images. I find myself rereading it in different ways.

  2. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Very powerful haiku!

  3. Marie Louise Munro Says:

    Love the resonance!

  4. Lex Says:

    Sound so clear you can see it. Beautiful haiku.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wonderful use of sound!


  6. martin1223 Says:

    prayer room
    the smell of the pond

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