crimson rosellas –
how many years since
I whistled?

5 Responses

  1. Theresa Says:

    Lovely work, Lorin!


  2. Marie Shimane Says:

    the last leaf
    but not the last laugh

  3. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:

    Wonderful haiku! I could not help reading it again and again. Splendid, Lorin.

    the train
    whistles to start
    I carry her
    memories till I reach
    the stretched distance

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Undertow Tanka Review, 2014 (Ed. Sergio Ortiz)

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wonderfully thought-provoking, Lorin.

    I was suddenly aware that my teenage daughter was whistling while working on her art project at the weekend – just like my mother used to when she was busy with something. I don't think I have ever really whistled…but then, perhaps you don't notice yourself doing it! :)


  5. martin1223 Says:

    falling down the calla lily dusk

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