Lovely!
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silence
the white space
around your poem
—KJMUNRO
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I've written a lot about white space & negative space as it fascinates me. Yes, the unsaid but sometimes still known and realised feelings and words that need not be said too.
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white sails…
a wind has also shaped
the tree
Anthology credits:
a procession of ripples, an anthology of selected haiku ed. laryalee fraser (2006)
Faces and Place ed. Don Baird (The Little Buddha Press 2015)
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The wind is its own white space and more! Sometimes silent, sometimes a whisper, sometimes a roar, but always leaving negative or white space behind it.
Hi Donna,
If you click onto Kathy's name under her haiku (—KJMUNRO) that will give you some bio info.
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Plus
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Also if you do an internet search with "KJMUNRO" haiku you will find a few wonderful results. Happy searching! :-)
thanks everyone for these kind words & the wonderful comments – I love the poems in response to other poems – & thanks especially Alan – an online search will turn up some work – & I have 2 leaflets with Leaf Press now
cheers,kj
November 8th, 2018 at 9:44 am
Such a delicate poem. So lovely.
November 8th, 2018 at 9:50 am
Lovely!
.
silence
the white space
around your poem
—KJMUNRO
.
.
I've written a lot about white space & negative space as it fascinates me. Yes, the unsaid but sometimes still known and realised feelings and words that need not be said too.
.
.
white sails…
a wind has also shaped
the tree
Alan Summers
Azami #21 (Japan, 1994); reprinted Azami #22 & 27 (Japan, 1995); tinywords (2006); Aesthetics (Bath Spa University publication, Summer 2007)
Anthology credits:
a procession of ripples, an anthology of selected haiku ed. laryalee fraser (2006)
Faces and Place ed. Don Baird (The Little Buddha Press 2015)
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The wind is its own white space and more! Sometimes silent, sometimes a whisper, sometimes a roar, but always leaving negative or white space behind it.
November 8th, 2018 at 10:44 am
Where can I find more of your writing KJMUNRO?
November 9th, 2018 at 2:18 am
Hi Donna,
If you click onto Kathy's name under her haiku (—KJMUNRO) that will give you some bio info.
.
Plus
.
Also if you do an internet search with "KJMUNRO" haiku you will find a few wonderful results. Happy searching! :-)
warm regards,
Alan
November 8th, 2018 at 12:33 pm
Love this one. A definite Yukon flavor.
November 8th, 2018 at 2:23 pm
very nice, Katherine, I really like the white color in the poem.
separation-
whiter than the moon
white wisteria
November 8th, 2018 at 3:19 pm
silent pond ?
an iguana strolls by
there goes my haiku
November 9th, 2018 at 12:16 pm
kj, what a beautiful haiku!
November 9th, 2018 at 1:10 pm
Written retry well.
November 9th, 2018 at 11:00 pm
thanks everyone for these kind words & the wonderful comments – I love the poems in response to other poems – & thanks especially Alan – an online search will turn up some work – & I have 2 leaflets with Leaf Press now
cheers,kj
November 27th, 2018 at 9:35 am
superlative.