fish tank
the four corners
of the world
Published by
Roland Packer
Roland lives in Hamilton, Ontario, Canada. For over 40 years he has worked as a professional musician in various roles; performer, teacher and composer. He has been writing haiku since the early 80s and has authored a mini-chapbook,"Wayfarers" (Phafours Press, 2017) and a full-length collection, "no heroic measures" (Red Moon Press, 2024). View all posts by Roland Packer
I can feel the fish at those two-syllable "corners" and the expanse in the word "world."
I love this! It’s so expansive – the fish world becomes ours by association. It makes me smile and think. So good.
Amazing perspective! Lovely!
Nice.
This says so much in such few words!
Makes me want to check again for my own corners.
the tadpole
swims away
a frog ?
awesome!
makes me think of that Pink Floyd song, 'Wish You Were Here.'
Wonderful! Lynne Rees said it all. I too was moved to think and feel with this one …
Sublime, conveys so effectively.
Just thought of this,though not as evocative
just before the earthquake
a goldfish…
circles the world
Love it!
marion