fish tank
the four corners
of the world

11 Responses

  1. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    I can feel the fish at those two-syllable "corners" and the expanse in the word "world."

  2. Lynne Rees Says:

    I love this! It’s so expansive – the fish world becomes ours by association. It makes me smile and think. So good.

  3. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Amazing perspective! Lovely!

  4. Jeffrey Winke Says:


  5. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    This says so much in such few words!

  6. Bob Whitmire Says:

    Makes me want to check again for my own corners.

  7. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    the tadpole
    swims away
    a frog ?

  8. Lawrence Cheong Says:

    makes me think of that Pink Floyd song, 'Wish You Were Here.'

  9. janewilliams Says:

    Wonderful! Lynne Rees said it all. I too was moved to think and feel with this one …

  10. Rashmi Vesa Says:

    Sublime, conveys so effectively.

    Just thought of this,though not as evocative

    just before the earthquake
    a goldfish…
    circles the world

  11. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love it!


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