black friday
two crows tear
at a plastic bag

 


11 Responses

  1. Alexa Selph Says:

    I think I saw those birds at the mall…. Love this haiku!

  2. kjmunro Says:

    perfect!

  3. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    Thank you so much, Kathy!

  4. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    Those scavengers tearing at plastic gets at the violence and futility beautifully.

  5. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    Thank you so much, Gaby.

  6. Bob Whitmire Says:

    Works so well! A perfect reflection.

  7. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    Thank you, Bob!

  8. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    Love this.

  9. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    I'm so glad, Jean! Thank you!

  10. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    I'm sure you did see these crows at the mall, Alexa. Thanks so much for your kind words.

  11. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    It’s appropriate that it is a plastic bag they are fighting over, Jennifer. Yes, there is the connection with shopping but also the fact that it is an item of no use to them and they still squabble over it on Black Friday is a great observation.

    marion

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