the ants
all fall in line
city life

 

2 Responses

  1. mike Says:

    Love this poem

  2. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:

    An interesting ku depicting urban life of the modern world. The image of ants has been beautifully crafted with juxtaposition.

    floating twigs–
    the ants choose
    their ways

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Frogpond, 37:3 Autumn Issue 2014

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