change of trains
a busker hurries through
the minute waltz
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Garry Eaton
Garry Eaton is a retired, jack-of-all-trades Canadian on the west coast of British Columbia. He has been practicing haiku since 2006. He is interested in the way the discipline is refocusing his attention on, and improving his appreciation of the gift of life.
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I love the movement (the way the lines end in a monosyllable following the two-syllable words in "busker hurries" and "minute") in this is a haiku that I wish I had written!
I love the movement (the way the lines end in a monosyllable following the two-syllable words in "busker hurries" and "minute") in this is a haiku that I wish I had written!
Thanks for your appreciative comment, Gaby!
Nice one. Made me smile.
Thanks for commenting Bob.
__ Gary, you've reminded me of my last subway ride on a train left this Boston subway-stop; my 'Park Street Station' echo, to your verse. _m
park street
this soft music overcomes
cold sense
screeches an outgoing train
rails harmonize
Thanks Magyar. ‘rails harmonize’ is a nice idea!