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1. Gaby Bedetti Says:
   January 30th, 2019 at 9:08 am

   I love the movement (the way the lines end in a monosyllable following the two-syllable words in "busker hurries" and "minute") in this is a haiku that I wish I had written!

2. Garry Says:
   January 30th, 2019 at 10:10 am

   Thanks for your appreciative comment, Gaby!

3. Bob Lucky Says:
   January 30th, 2019 at 12:08 pm

   Nice one. Made me smile.

4. Garry Says:
   January 30th, 2019 at 5:37 pm

   Thanks for commenting Bob.

5. Magyar Says:
   January 31st, 2019 at 9:24 am

   __ Gary, you've reminded me of my last subway ride on a train left this Boston subway-stop; my 'Park Street Station' echo, to your verse. _m

   park street
   this soft music overcomes
   cold sense
   screeches an outgoing train
   rails harmonize

6. Garry Says:
   January 31st, 2019 at 10:48 am

   Thanks Magyar. ‘rails harmonize’ is a nice idea!

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