change of trains
a busker hurries through
the minute waltz

 

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Garry Eaton

Garry Eaton is a retired, jack-of-all-trades Canadian on the west coast of British Columbia. He has been practicing haiku since 2006. He is interested in the way the discipline is refocusing his attention on, and improving his appreciation of the gift of life.

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  1. I love the movement (the way the lines end in a monosyllable following the two-syllable words in "busker hurries" and "minute") in this is a haiku that I wish I had written!

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  5. __ Gary, you've reminded me of my last subway ride on a train left this Boston subway-stop; my 'Park Street Station' echo, to your verse. _m

    park street
    this soft music overcomes
    cold sense
    screeches an outgoing train
    rails harmonize

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