his just shaved face the fragrant coolness of spring
—Adelaide B. Shaw
Issue 19.1 | 1 April 2019
Cute.
I experienced this with four senses! Well done Adelaide!
Oh… texture! Great to have that in a haiku. Lovely, Adelaide.
Gracious parallel Adelaide, and my further wishes. _m
Lovely haiku, Adelaide.
My father?s face after a shave is right here. I can smell that spring cologne he used.
Fresh, loving and lovely poem!
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April 1st, 2019 at 1:14 pm
Cute.
April 1st, 2019 at 1:34 pm
I experienced this with four senses! Well done Adelaide!
April 1st, 2019 at 1:45 pm
Oh… texture! Great to have that in a haiku. Lovely, Adelaide.
April 1st, 2019 at 2:17 pm
Gracious parallel Adelaide, and my further wishes. _m
April 1st, 2019 at 4:25 pm
Lovely haiku, Adelaide.
My father?s face after a shave is right here.
I can smell that spring cologne he used.
April 1st, 2019 at 8:08 pm
Fresh, loving and lovely poem!