his just shaved face
the fragrant coolness
of spring


6 Responses

  1. Pbergonzi Says:

    Cute.

  2. Barbara Kaufmann Says:

    I experienced this with four senses! Well done Adelaide!

  3. Lynne Rees Says:

    Oh… texture! Great to have that in a haiku. Lovely, Adelaide.

  4. Magyar Says:

    Gracious parallel Adelaide, and my further wishes. _m

  5. Mary Jo Balistreri Says:

    Lovely haiku, Adelaide.

    My father’s face after a shave is right here.
    I can smell that spring cologne he used.

  6. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Fresh, loving and lovely poem!

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