making sandcastles
my son fills the moat
from his bladder
(Runner-up in Haiku Calendar Competition, 2015)
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Tracy Davidson
Tracy Davidson lives in Warwickshire, England, and enjoys writing poetry and flash fiction. Her work has appeared in various publications and anthologies, including: Modern Haiku, Simply Haiku, A Hundred Gourds, Atlas Poetica, Frogpond, Heron's Nest, Mslexia, The Binnacle, The Right-Eyed Deer, and In Protest: 150 Poems on Human Rights.
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I just love this!
__ Tracey, such realistic humor positioned within your senryu, priceless! _m
elegant in it's very vulgarity
Excellent use of a natural function, and after all don't adults do this, flooding the oceans with raw sewage? I'm sure there was a photo of me as a six year old at the seaside, completely starkers, and it might have been before or after I built a river. :-)