the sharp pop of cooling lids prickly pear jam
—Lesley Anne Swanson
Issue 19.2 | 26 September 2019
I love sound placed within haiku!
—LESLEY ANNE SWANSON
I've heard of Prickly Pear, but not as jam, fascinating!
And you've caught that special sound of a lid being operated so well!!!
Love every word!
Here's one of my own, with a pop! :-)
Guelder-rose… the universe pops from a jam jar
Alan Summers Troutswirl – The Haiku Foundation: A Sense of Place: MEADOW/FIELD – smell ed. KJMunro (October 2018)
__ 'Tis grand, when thought work such as yours Lesley Anne, creates and energizes other timely thoughts. The cranberrys' tartness… under the pop of that canning jar's lid._m
reddened cranberrys now afloat to their harvest wild turkeys watch
Such brevity and yet the visual and sound effects so lucid! Awesome haiku!
A synesthetic pun. In a haiku! Pretty darned sharp! Wonderful poem, Lesley Anne. – Jim Ellis/Auburn NY
Thanks to all of you, for the feedback!
autumn wind leaving its song behind mourning dove
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September 26th, 2019 at 1:35 pm
I love sound placed within haiku!
the sharp pop
of cooling lids
prickly pear jam
—LESLEY ANNE SWANSON
I've heard of Prickly Pear, but not as jam, fascinating!
And you've caught that special sound of a lid being operated so well!!!
Love every word!
Here's one of my own, with a pop! :-)
Guelder-rose…
the universe pops
from a jam jar
Alan Summers
Troutswirl – The Haiku Foundation:
A Sense of Place: MEADOW/FIELD – smell
ed. KJMunro (October 2018)
September 26th, 2019 at 6:12 pm
__ 'Tis grand, when thought work such as yours Lesley Anne, creates and energizes other timely thoughts. The cranberrys' tartness… under the pop of that canning jar's lid._m
reddened cranberrys
now afloat to their harvest
wild turkeys watch
September 26th, 2019 at 11:36 pm
Such brevity and yet the visual and sound effects so lucid! Awesome haiku!
September 27th, 2019 at 2:00 am
A synesthetic pun. In a haiku!
Pretty darned sharp!
Wonderful poem, Lesley Anne.
– Jim Ellis/Auburn NY
September 27th, 2019 at 9:59 am
Thanks to all of you, for the feedback!
October 11th, 2019 at 7:12 am
autumn wind
leaving its song behind
mourning dove