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  1. I love sound placed within haiku!

    the sharp pop
    of cooling lids
    prickly pear jam

    —LESLEY ANNE SWANSON

    I've heard of Prickly Pear, but not as jam, fascinating!

    And you've caught that special sound of a lid being operated so well!!!

    Love every word!

    Here's one of my own, with a pop! :-)

    Guelder-rose…
    the universe pops
    from a jam jar

    Alan Summers
    Troutswirl – The Haiku Foundation:
    A Sense of Place: MEADOW/FIELD – smell
    ed. KJMunro (October 2018)

  2. __ 'Tis grand, when thought work such as yours Lesley Anne, creates and energizes other timely thoughts. The cranberrys' tartness… under the pop of that canning jar's lid._m

    reddened cranberrys
    now afloat to their harvest
    wild turkeys watch

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