the sharp pop
of cooling lids
prickly pear jam
—Lesley Anne Swanson
Issue 19.2 | 26 September 2019
I love sound placed within haiku!
—LESLEY ANNE SWANSON
I've heard of Prickly Pear, but not as jam, fascinating!
And you've caught that special sound of a lid being operated so well!!!
Love every word!
Here's one of my own, with a pop! :-)
the universe pops
from a jam jar
Troutswirl – The Haiku Foundation:
A Sense of Place: MEADOW/FIELD – smell
ed. KJMunro (October 2018)
__ 'Tis grand, when thought work such as yours Lesley Anne, creates and energizes other timely thoughts. The cranberrys' tartness… under the pop of that canning jar's lid._m
now afloat to their harvest
wild turkeys watch
Such brevity and yet the visual and sound effects so lucid! Awesome haiku!
A synesthetic pun. In a haiku!
Pretty darned sharp!
Wonderful poem, Lesley Anne.
– Jim Ellis/Auburn NY
Thanks to all of you, for the feedback!
leaving its song behind
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