end of summer–
the hot dog vendor’s
last customer

5 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:


    I love this!

    Sometimes a haiku can be so enveloping in its warmth, atmosphere, and a feeling of life is okay after all, and this is one of those. Thank you, thank you, thank you!


  2. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    summer’s gone
    fall for it
    automatically autumn ?

  3. magyar Says:

    __ Nice Patricia, you've caused me to think back in time to those end of summer forest memories, and that sensual smell of dried leaves. Thanks Pat_!

    autumn forests
    their scent of browned leaves
    a ruffed grouse

  4. Robert Kingston Says:

    A thought provoking poem that leaves one wanting more. Nicely done Patricia.

  5. Bob Redmond Says:

    You've given dignity to hot dogs :)

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