one autumn cloud meandering pony ride
—James Schlett
Issue 19.2 | 9 December 2019
autumn sky pillows on blue along~the~long~trail
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—JAMES SCHLETT
Glorious focus on one cloud that may be meandering as much as the rider and the pony beneath it.
I'm also reminded of this famous haiku:
moving into the sun the pony takes with him some mountain shadow
Jane Reichhold, American Haiku in Four Seasons Yilin Press, Nanjing, China (1991)
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autumn deepens… a passenger squirrels away his season ticket
Alan Summers Bacopa Literary Review (June 2019) ed. Kaye Linden
Nifty, thought James! __ Here, with your haiku James, you have caused my minimally echoed scribble, an imagined sight of "horse clouds"; thank you! _
a herd of snow in trails across this cold sky clouds a-trot
meandering leaves behind the sound of shadows autumn loneliness
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December 9th, 2019 at 9:28 am
autumn sky
pillows on blue
along~the~long~trail
December 9th, 2019 at 9:50 am
.
one autumn cloud
meandering
pony ride
—JAMES SCHLETT
.
Glorious focus on one cloud that may be meandering as much as the rider and the pony beneath it.
I'm also reminded of this famous haiku:
moving into the sun
the pony takes with him
some mountain shadow
Jane Reichhold, American Haiku in Four Seasons
Yilin Press, Nanjing, China (1991)
***
autumn deepens…
a passenger squirrels away
his season ticket
Alan Summers
Bacopa Literary Review (June 2019) ed. Kaye Linden
December 10th, 2019 at 8:59 am
Nifty, thought James!
__ Here, with your haiku James, you have caused my minimally echoed scribble, an imagined sight of "horse clouds"; thank you! _
a herd of snow
in trails across this cold sky
clouds a-trot
December 11th, 2019 at 10:02 am
meandering leaves
behind the sound of shadows
autumn loneliness