one autumn cloud
pony ride

4 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    autumn sky
    pillows on blue

  2. Alan Summers Says:


    one autumn cloud
    pony ride



    Glorious focus on one cloud that may be meandering as much as the rider and the pony beneath it.

    I'm also reminded of this famous haiku:

    moving into the sun
    the pony takes with him
    some mountain shadow

    Jane Reichhold, American Haiku in Four Seasons
    Yilin Press, Nanjing, China (1991)


    autumn deepens…
    a passenger squirrels away
    his season ticket

    Alan Summers
    Bacopa Literary Review (June 2019) ed. Kaye Linden

  3. magyar Says:

    Nifty, thought James!
    __ Here, with your haiku James, you have caused my minimally echoed scribble, an imagined sight of "horse clouds"; thank you! _

    a herd of snow
    in trails across this cold sky
    clouds a-trot

  4. martin1223 Says:

    meandering leaves
    behind the sound of shadows
    autumn loneliness

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