empty terminal the last bus riderless departs on schedule
—Ron Scully
Issue 19.2 | 30 December 2019
love the second and third lines! . cold wind the empty train pulls out on time .
love this haiku!
It captures both emptiness and a sense of moving forward, regardless of the seeming futility. I can imagine the driver thinking about the next destination, and the people who might be waiting there.
autumn leaves fall the old stripper sheds her clothes ???
a poem worthy of Kerouac!
Beautiful…
Journey is not guaranteed But insured …
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December 30th, 2019 at 9:06 am
love the second and third lines!
.
cold wind
the empty train
pulls out on time
.
December 30th, 2019 at 10:15 am
love this haiku!
It captures both emptiness and a sense of moving forward, regardless of the seeming futility. I can imagine the driver thinking about the next destination, and the people who might be waiting there.
December 30th, 2019 at 10:22 am
autumn leaves fall
the old stripper
sheds her clothes ???
December 30th, 2019 at 1:25 pm
a poem worthy of Kerouac!
December 31st, 2019 at 4:54 am
Beautiful…
Journey is not guaranteed
But insured …