Sky is such an important element to our lives, and never moreso than now. I also hope that actual prison reforms will eventually happen, as we know that current practices do not reduce but only increase crime.
Wonderfully evocative series of lines giving a powerful overall image!
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the snow-spinning wind
I dream of only big trees
in my prison yard
Alan Summers
Runner Up, The IAFOR Vladimir Devidé Haiku Award 2015
The International Academic Forum (IAFOR)
July 6th, 2020 at 8:35 am
Rashmi, a good poem, makes one seriously think. Thanks and have a great day.
July 7th, 2020 at 6:58 am
Thank you for reading. Have a great day !!
July 6th, 2020 at 8:36 am
Ab lovely, Rashmi.
Intense.
July 7th, 2020 at 6:56 am
Thank you for reading and for your thoughts on the haiku_/_ _/_
July 6th, 2020 at 8:50 am
Thank you for your poem:
July 7th, 2020 at 6:54 am
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment
July 6th, 2020 at 10:45 am
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July 6th, 2020 at 5:03 pm
Stark and intense.A wonderful example of how haiku can make one think deeply.
July 7th, 2020 at 6:53 am
Thank you Vidya!
July 7th, 2020 at 9:18 am
Hi Martha,
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warm regards,
Alan
July 7th, 2020 at 9:21 am
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a crack
in the concrete box
prisoner’s sky
—RASHMI VESA
Sky is such an important element to our lives, and never moreso than now. I also hope that actual prison reforms will eventually happen, as we know that current practices do not reduce but only increase crime.
Wonderfully evocative series of lines giving a powerful overall image!
***
the snow-spinning wind
I dream of only big trees
in my prison yard
Alan Summers
Runner Up, The IAFOR Vladimir Devidé Haiku Award 2015
The International Academic Forum (IAFOR)
July 9th, 2020 at 7:58 am
Thank you for the insight and for sharing your thought provoking haiku.